This column by Krista Ramsey is
about children and how they “give us hope”. She says that she visits different
schools a lot and is always happy to see different kids and interact with them.
http://enquirer.com/columns/ramsey/1997/02/022297_kr.html
"We always talk about our
children giving us hope for tomorrow. Some give us hope for today." In my
opinion, this is the best written line throughout the column. She uses shorter
sentences for the most part. By using shorter sentences, columnists can keep
readers focused on the main idea. Ramsey
also uses the technique of repetition to enforce an idea. “Every day I look at
that pencil. Every day I am touched by how instinctively Rafiel gives.” She
repeats the term ‘every day’ to show that this wasn’t just a one time thing.

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